User:Nemerson4970/No Child Left Behind Act/Kfsimerau Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Nemerson4970


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Nemerson4970/No_Child_Left_Behind_Act?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * No Child Left Behind Act
 * No Child Left Behind Act

Evaluate the drafted changes
To begin, I think the changes made to the original article were really great additions that provide a lot more insight into the legislation, especially in the legislative history section. I would suggest adding in that section if possible the main reason for why the bill was being proposed. I saw the question regarding adding all the titles or whether to just add in the major provisions and in my opinion I feel that adding in the all the titles is a good idea. For my article, all the titles are added in and there are also major provisions within the titles that are listed as well. That being said, if there are important provisions that your article is known for I would add those in as well and keep all the titles and the descriptions you added. Since this law has many titles I would stick to short summaries of each title. Overall, I would just suggest adding in the major provisions if applicable and adding in the reasons why the bill was proposed.