User:Nemerson4970/No Child Left Behind Act/Trevormyrvold Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Nemerson4970)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Nemerson4970/No Child Left Behind Act
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * No Child Left Behind Act
 * No Child Left Behind Act

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hello,

- Solid start so far, everything is definitely relevant to your topic (law) and nothing was out of the ordinary or distracting as a reader.

- This seems to be a very neutral article with claims that don't seem to be too heavily bias or leaning towards one particular part so much.

- In terms of the viewpoints, I think you covered some important ones, since your original wiki article already has a a lot of information on it, I think editing what is there may also be beneficial.

- Solid in-text citations (all of which are working) and are well used to represent your point in the legislative history section!

- When you are talking about these titles, it might be helpful to add a source or citation under each title so that readers can click on it to see where you're getting that information or if it's purely personal knowledge/opinion.

- All of the information seems to be up to date. In terms of adding stuff, I think editing what is already there, and expanding the legislative history part is probably your best bet from what I see.