User:Neruall4/Yangtze Delta/Soft Sweets R Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) Lauren.


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Neruall4/Yangtze_Delta?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lauren mainly focuses on editing the citation of the article. She and her partner add sources for sentences which need additional citation. Even though for some of the links, they think that are related but not relevant and authoritative enough, they put their comments and links below for making the article better.

They also add two new contents for the article. But I think they can need more details about those two parts, economy and metropolitan areas, based on the sources they found.