User:NevaehRose/User:NevaehRose/sandbox/Uhhlea Peer Review

General info
NevaehRose
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:NevaehRose/sandbox
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * User:NevaehRose/sandbox

Evaluate the drafted changes
I like that the 'creator of makeup by Mario' section of your article is well organized and the information flows together nicely. You make it very apparent that that Mario is an important figure when it comes to understanding makeup as a whole. This section seems to be properly cited as well. However, the claim that Mario has worked with other celebrities in the second paragraph might need a source. I noticed you don't have a lead in section. Overall, I think this is a really good start.

The rest of the article has unfinished sections.