User:Newty123/Aztec warfare/Karlock Peer Review

General info
Newty123
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Newty123/Aztec warfare - Wikipedia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Aztec warfare - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I fully agree with your assessment that much of this article sounds right but needs citations. The article as a whole and your proposed changes look and feel neutral, however the first sentence under the "Fortifications" section in the original article feels a little odd to me, and perhaps it could be worth trying to re-word.

I also really like your idea of bringing in a Nahuatl dictionary as well as a translation of the Florentine Codex as sources. I think it would add some much-needed context and citations that the original article might be lacking.

I noticed that a lot of the references in the article call back to the same author, Ross Hassig, and I wonder if it might be worth looking for some other, maybe even more modern, authors to corroborate his claims to ensure enough viewpoints are being represented.