User:Newyorkmainer/Lissocarcinus orbicularis/Savanna.deer Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Newyorkmainer


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Newyorkmainer/Lissocarcinus_orbicularis?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Lissocarcinus orbicularis

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead

-Lead does not show new content in updated article

-Intro sentence is great - explains the animal and what its related to

-Lead does not explain what sections are going to be talked about

-Lead is concise

Content

-Content is relevant to the topic - goes in detail about the harlequin crab

-Content is up to date using real life sources

-Content explains topics about the harlequin crab that is not commonly known. This is beneficial to the public since this acurate data is now for everyone to use. Good job! This looks really good!

Tone and Balance

-Tone is neutral through the entire page

Sources and References

-Sources come from research done by scientists showing true real life answers. All accurate information

Organization

-Content is concise and easy to read - someone who is not familiar with the topic will understand it easily!

-No spelling or grammatical errors noted

Images and Media

-No images or media

Overall Impressions

-This overall looks really good! The only thing I would add is to fix your lead to make sure it briefly talks about what the article will be covering (kind of like the inro to an academic essay) and maybe add a picture.