User:Nfrinier/Screw-cutting lathe/Agaudet09 Peer Review

General info
Nfrinier
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Creating User:Nfrinier/Screw-cutting lathe - Wikipedia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Screw-cutting lathe - Wikipedia
 * Screw-cutting lathe - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
Most of what this person has done is added citations to the article. I think that is a very valuable contribution in terms of giving credit to the proper people to maintain integrity of what the article is supposed to look like. This also maintains a sense of neutrality by making sure that there's a proper sense of information from outside sources. The only thing I would suggest is maybe working on adding some contributions of their own, given the fact that they seem to be doing so much research about the topic.