User:Ngal7/Evaluate an Article

Evaluate an article
This is where you will complete your article evaluation. Please use the template below to evaluate your selected article.


 * Name of article: (link) Lodovico Dolce
 * Briefly describe why you have chosen this article to evaluate.

Lead

 * Guiding questions


 * Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic?
 * yes
 * Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections?
 * yes
 * Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article?
 * no
 * Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed?
 * concise

Content

 * Guiding questions


 * Is the article's content relevant to the topic?
 * yes
 * Is the content up-to-date?
 * yes
 * Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong?
 * no, but the descriptions of his work by genre could use a little more detail explaining the various books listed
 * Does the article deal with one of Wikipedia's equity gaps? Does it address topics related to historically underrepresented populations or topics?
 * yes

Tone and Balance

 * Guiding questions


 * Is the article neutral?
 * yes
 * Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position?
 * no
 * Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented?
 * no, but the relationship with Titian should be more elaborated on to maintain the fact that he served as Titian's PR as the article suggests
 * Does the article attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another?
 * no, good summary of his life and works

Sources and References

 * Guiding questions


 * Are all facts in the article backed up by a reliable secondary source of information?
 * not all, but most; example: "public relations man" in lead
 * Are the sources thorough - i.e. Do they reflect the available literature on the topic?
 * yes, thorough and scholarly sources
 * Are the sources current?
 * most are, but some are written in the 80s
 * when his birthday is discussed, perhaps quote a different, more current source
 * Are the sources written by a diverse spectrum of authors? Do they include historically marginalized individuals where possible?
 * yes
 * Check a few links. Do they work?
 * yes

Organization

 * Guiding questions


 * Is the article well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read?
 * yes
 * Does the article have any grammatical or spelling errors?
 * no
 * Is the article well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic?
 * yes it is but it would be great to have a bit more information in the sections that describe the works, maybe a few sentences just to summarize what each section covers

Images and Media

 * Guiding questions


 * Does the article include images that enhance understanding of the topic?
 * yes, well suited to his biography
 * Are images well-captioned?
 * yes, self-explanatory
 * Do all images adhere to Wikipedia's copyright regulations?
 * I think so, license confirmed at the time of image upload and says "no restrictions"
 * Are the images laid out in a visually appealing way?
 * yes, in a practical way

Checking the talk page

 * Guiding questions


 * What kinds of conversations, if any, are going on behind the scenes about how to represent this topic?
 * How is the article rated? Is it a part of any WikiProjects?
 * How does the way Wikipedia discusses this topic differ from the way we've talked about it in class?

Overall impressions

 * Guiding questions


 * What is the article's overall status?
 * good information in article, good organization, needs to add slightly more detail
 * good format
 * no grammatical errors
 * What are the article's strengths?
 * concise, clear, mentions many works
 * clear biography
 * How can the article be improved?
 * more detail, also fix errors listed above
 * How would you assess the article's completeness - i.e. Is the article well-developed? Is it underdeveloped or poorly developed?
 * moderate, needs more development

Optional activity

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