User:Ngo0014/Tick-borne disease/Recordplayer88 Peer Review

General info
Ngo0014
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ngo0014/Tick-borne_disease?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Tick-borne disease

Evaluate the drafted changes
I could not see any current edits on my side of your sandbox. Incase it is helpful, I did find that there are two different sandboxes and only one is linked to our class so that other can peer review. For some overall edits, I would suggest possibly expanding upon the Diagnosis section or maybe adding a section of what kind of animals/secondary hosts typically have the ticks or pass on tick-borne diseases. I found it was helpful to find articles on JSTOR or other academic journal sites.