User:NguyenMTN/Oesophagogastric junctional adenocarcinoma/Shussain96 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

NguyenMTN


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Oesophagogastric junctional adenocarcinoma
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead section clearly describes the OGJ adenocarcinoma and providers the reader with a clear picture of what the main context of the article will discuss. However, I think the lead section can further be improved by adding the remainder of the context of the article. For example, the discussion of risk factors, clinical features, and classification is not mentioned in the lead section but makes up a large part of the body of the article.

For the risk factor section you may consider expanding the section to include more risk factors other than the biggest risk factors. You may also consider documenting the age, if there is one, at which the risk becomes higher for this disease. Consider including a link for the wikipage article for Barret's esophagus so reader's can find more details on that disease if desired.

The article has a very nice flow to it and I like the sections you have created! I only have a few minor suggestions for improvement in this area. One suggestion I would like to make is wording in the clinical features and oncogenetics section. I would like to see a little less medical terminology used or if the terms must be used provide a brief description of terminology and/or link another wikipage explaining the terminology. The other minor improvement I had was suggesting the addition of a picture describing the staging classifications for OGJ adenocarcinoma under the classification section.

Overall, the content included is relevant to your topic and appears to be well researched. The references are relevant and accurate. My overall initial impression is that this article is off to a very strong start and just needs a few minor changes to be more reader friendly for a larger viewing audience. Good Job!