User:Nhaley11/Sex differences in psychology/BingoBongoBungo Peer Review

General info
Nhaley11
 * Whose work are you reviewing?
 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Nhaley11/Sex_differences_in_psychology?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Sex differences in psychology

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I like that my peer specifically detailed parts of the article that they made an edit to. This makes it a lot easier to see their exact contributions and addition to the material. The lead was not changed. The content added was relevant and provided more context for the rest of the article. For instance, I liked the additional details to clarify use of terminology when it came to sex versus gender. In terms of content improvement, I would recommend going more into detail differentiating between emotional experience and emotional expressivity. The tone was netural, neither strong nor weak and did not possess a clear intent to persuade the reader of anything. The sources appear legitimate and the organization was clear to follow. Overall, my peer's addition made the article more complete.

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