User:Nhaley11/Sex differences in psychology/Cyngao Peer Review

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Nhaley11
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Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I read over the changes that you've made so far and they look good! I specifically like that you added some clarification between sex and gender since the article originally explains that it can be difficult to differentiate between them but didn't provide any information on how the two concepts are actually different. I think that it would be even better if you expanded some more on the differences, explaining how sex pertains to biology while gender pertains more to perspective or identity. Lastly, the sentence should be cited since Wikipedia depends on citations to ensure the articles are reliable.