User:Nhaley11/Sex differences in psychology/Esay02 Peer Review

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Nhaley11
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Evaluate the drafted changes
The article is comprehensive but missing a couple key features. First, the definition is relatively unbiased and fulfills the expectations of a good definition. What is missing are historical examples of the topic at hand and case studies of sex differences.