User:Nharkdivad/Immigration Act of 1990/Gzora1 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

User:Nharkdivad Nharkdivad


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Nharkdivad/Immigration Act of 1990


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Immigration Act of 1990

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead is a good start as it introduces the bill, the only changes I would make would be would be to a few capitalization fixes with words like "House" and "Senate." The content that was added is good as it includes the history, as well as a few more provisions. However, with the history, I would maybe expand and each sentence of history and create a paragraph or two to help the section flow a little bit better. This article does include a lot of peer reviewed sources, so when the section is written as a paragraph, there will be lots of sources to back up the writing. I like how the article is organized, but the sections just need a few paragraphs in each to have the article fully complete. There are no images on the page, but I am not surprised as I can not think of an image that would make sense to go on this page, other than maybe the signing of the bill into law. Overall, this article is off to a great start, and can be improved as edits are made to the paragraphs to allow them to flow better.