User:Nhart2/Selma to Montgomery marches/Asadiq1119 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Nhart2


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Nhart2/Selma_to_Montgomery_marches?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Selma to Montgomery marches

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The work added by you contributed to the article as the article had an orderly flow. Your work was neutral it stated facts. You spoke about the literacy tests, bloody Tuesday, Jimmie Lee Jacksons murder and the violence against Amelia Boynton and then backed everything you spoke about with up with evidence, which make it a reliable article. I liked how your article contributed to the already existing article, as the whole article speaks about how difficult it was to get African American people the right to vote and when it was finally legalized all the challenges, they faced in trying to register to vote. It spoke about all the violence and dangers they faced even when segregation was abolished.