User:Nhennum/Chirodropidae/Gmoore12 Peer Review

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Evaluate the drafted changes
In the sentences, you stated that there are specific characters to distinguish them apart and you begin to focus on them being branch and more specifically having their own tentacles; however, I think you should add more because you said "characters" or change it to "specific character" because I feel as if it all got roped into one character. Also, the composition changing based on body size; I feel like this needs more detail like how the composition changes. For example, the article at this website, https://www.deepdyve.com/lp/springer-journals/nematocyst-composition-of-the-cubomedusan-chiropsalmus-quadrigatus-ElgUjlln03, states that the nematocysts change, but they also change based on the stage in life they are. Gmoore12 (talk) 16:29, 18 October 2021 (UTC) GM