User:Nherbison/Badlands National Park/Texasbird Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Nherbison


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Nherbison/Badlands_National_Park?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Badlands National Park
 * Badlands National Park

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead has not been updated to include new info from the editor, however the new info looks like a great addition to the section on wildlife. The new content included so far by the editor looks relevant and well written. It also appears that that content is current and not missing any key points. The content however is a little bit lacking and does need some work in that sense. The editor did included notes on what they want to change and add to the article which is very useful. Overall the content did not seem to have any major grammatical errors and was well written. The sources provided by the editor seem to have accurate information and are well chosen.The links to the sources all seem to work. Overall the editor has a good start and seems to be headed in a good direction.