User:Nicardooo/Ashley Graham/Kassidysheppard Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Nicardooo


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Nicardooo/Ashley_Graham?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Ashley Graham (model)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Your edits are very well written, the only thing they are missing is references. Other than that, they look great!