User:Nicgrana/Microaggression/MedLife4 Peer Review

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 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Nicgrana


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Nicgrana/Microaggression


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Microaggression

Evaluate the drafted changes
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The improvement that you added to the article, is great I like how it brings attention today's society. And how the example provided from the book is a great example that explores the race profiling that being black in America entails. The tone of the inserted improvement I found to be neutral and balance and not showing any bias. Though I would like to add a possible suggestion of the sentence that you inserted. Possibly rearranging it to "White privilege has become the the new norm in a society that has become more politically-correct that serves to reinforce stereotypes that are present in microaggressions."

Peer Review Response
Thank you so much for your suggestion! Respectfully, I feel that the way I had originally written the statement is more direct and easier to comprehend but your re-wording of it has brought to my attention that I need to expand on it a bit more. Perhaps the statement of white privilege "becoming the new norm" is not entirely correct. White privilege has always been prevalent in the United States, it has just taken a new form over the years. I will continue experimenting with how to word this for the article and add more to support the statement.