User:Nicgrana/Microaggression/Zweathersby Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Nicgrana


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Nicgrana/Microaggression?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Microaggression

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think this is a great subject, but it is easy to add biases to the article. The vocabulary can be very one-sided. However, I believe in your draft you provided some great information. Especially with the definitions you added. I believe this will help people who are new to the subject a lot. I also believe the portion about autism and social anxiety was very interesting, and would also be something good to expand on. The original article itself could be better with being more inclusive with situations and meanings around the world.

Peer Review Response
Honestly, I had not even considered adding to the autism and social anxiety portions but you highlighting it makes me realize that this is something that should be discussed more. I shall certainly look into ways to contribute to that section while avoiding as much biases as possible. And I absolutely agree that as a whole, the article could be more inclusive with its examples of situations and cultural meanings. While Asian-American issues most definitely deserve to be highlighted, an article that is meant to inform about microaggressions is not well-rounded if it leaves out the experiences of Black Americans - this is why I chose to work on this article. Thank you so much for your suggestions!