User:Nicholas Rondan/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Battle of Carchemish

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article because, bronze age wars has always been something I found fascinating, and I'd personally like to know more about them, the meaning, the tactics, and the consequences/aftermath.

Evaluate the article
The lead is straight to the point, but it does not include information that is present throughout the article, for example the lead talks about the Persians, but does not mention them outside of the lead.

The content is relevant to the subject, but it is not entirely up-to-date. The article does not represent enough of what it is about, if anything it is under detailed. The article appears biased in some statements; it does not bring in fringe viewpoints as it stated mostly as matter-of-fact statements.

Overall the article has a content assessment rating of start-class. It can be improved further by adding more reliably sourced information. It's strengths are through the lead which gets straight to the point, but it is severely underdeveloped with some slight issues in grammar.