User:Nick5carr/Chingo/HyeyoungKimuw Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Nick5carr


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Nick5carr/Chingo?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Chingo

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hi Nick, while I like the stuff you added to the article, I think it will be nice to have a seperate heading to indicate what you are going to talk about. I think the stuff that you added is informational and have neutral tone, I think you can add a little more detail to the section where you talk about types of rocks and volcanoes. Also, your reference from Smithsonian seems like its not working. but otherwise, good work!