User:NickMackay9/Falconer's formula/Shaleeg Peer Review

Peer review
This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General inf0

 * Whose work are you reviewing? NickMackay9


 * Link to draft you're reviewing: Falconer's formula

Content
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added relevant to the topic?
 * Is the content added up-to-date?
 * Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong?

'''Yes the added content is relevant and up-to-date. Nothing that was added does not belong.'''

Tone and Balance
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added neutral?
 * Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position?
 * Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented?
 * Does the content added attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another?

The content added is neutral and unbiased.

Sources and References
Guiding questions:


 * Is all new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information?
 * Are the sources thorough - i.e. Do they reflect the available literature on the topic?
 * Are the sources current?
 * Check a few links. Do they work?

'''The articles does have a few sources. More would be better because there are only three. They lead to good places to get the information on the particular subject. I think the sources may not be completely free, so if you found some that were easier to get might improve the article more.'''

Organization
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read?
 * Does the content added have any grammatical or spelling errors?
 * Is the content added well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic?

'''Yes it is easy to read. Maybe if there was more, explaining even more would help. No errors in spelling or grammar. If more sections on this topic could be added that would help, but it is just a starting point which is good.'''

Overall impressions
Guiding questions:


 * Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete?
 * What are the strengths of the content added?
 * How can the content added be improved?

'''The content added, in my opinion helps make the topic more clear. I understood more of what the topic was finding from the added content.'''