User:NickMcCo/Karel Fortyn/Jrpaul7 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

N/A


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Karel Fortyn


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Karel Fortyn

Evaluate the drafted changes
Peer review

Complete your peer review exercise below, providing as much constructive criticism as possible. The more detailed suggestions you provide, the more useful it will be to your classmate. Make sure you consider each of the following aspects:

The article I was assigned to peer review was not finished/published. There was only a lead sentence with some cross links on the stub page. This was not enough information for me to complete a full and accurate peer review.