User:NickMcCo/Karel Fortyn/Wmossbrook Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

NickMcCo


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * No Draft Link Provided


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Karel Fortyn - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
There is only one sentence present in the article that describes her ethnicity, occupation, and accomplishment. This article needs a great deal of information describing her early life, her education, and her research that lead to breakthrough surgical method. The single sentence is well written, but without evidence the word "breakthrough" seems slightly biased. There are no references listed to review. This is an issue as there is information presented that requires a source as it is stated fact. Overall, this article needs a lot of work as there is practically no information presented in it and there is no draft available to compare it to.