User:Nickmurphy72903/Sea lion/Bibliography

Proposal
In the article “Sea Lion” there are many pieces of information and grammar that needs to be worked on that I could tweak or fix. There are many sentences in this article that have low relevance to the topic and veer off of the heading. There is zero up to date information on whether or not sea lions are endangered and there doesn’t seem to be much information on a sea lions diet. Both endangerment and diet are critical to have in an article based on an animal. There is information from multiple sources that I’ve found that could be useful in these sections. In the section titled “Parasites and Diseases”, there are a lot of grammatical errors and run on sentences that needs worked on. This article is a decent article but I believe there is a lot of work that I could do when it comes to adding information in and correcting grammatical errors.