User:Nickrocha/Meloetyphlus fuscatus/WintermuteKnows Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Nicholas Rocha


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Nickrocha/Meloetyphlus fuscatus


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * n/a

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead section is well written and informative, and provides the key information that people searching for this species would probably be working for. One change that could be made is not having the species name in the taxobox be a hyperlink to itself in an endless loop, usually the format is to have it italicized and bolded. Another thing I noticed is that in the "Life Cycle" section the citation is on the header and not at the end of the paragraph like in the common format. The page is also missing a "taxobar" on the bottom, which is not necessarily essential but is relatively common on species wikipages. In the "habitat" section, some more detail could be added if possible since as-is it seems a bit short for a whole separate paragraph especially since it already has three different citations.