User:NickyBishop/Stories (social media)/Madison.brockbank Peer Review

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Lead section is short and concise, could possibly include more information on different platforms stories are seen on. Lead does not include brief description about what is being said in the article. Would change "in online marketing" to "online marketing" to sound better. Snapchat Support link ( "Snapchat Support". Retrieved 2019-07-31 ) #5 is not relavent to what was previously said. Overall very good article, and very informative. Good use of sources many available.