User:NicolasSmith216/Kentucky (film)/Alex E Mitchell Peer Review

When you read the plot description, can you follow the story of the movie? Note any parts that were confusing to you.

 * - Yeah! It's kind of a confusing sounding plot at first though just because there's so many different deaths and family and enemy connections. It might be easier to separate some sentences into two so that it seems a bit more clear. For example: "He is killed by Dillon and his youngest son Peter (Bobs Watson) cries at the soldiers riding away with the horses." might be better as: "Thad is murdered by Dillon. Thad's son, Peter (Bobs Watson), cries out at the soldiers riding away with his father's horses." This would be a really small change but it just took me a couple times to read it at first and understand what it was saying just because of all the different names. This same type of change could be applicable other places in the plot summary as well when it comes to important plot points between different characters.

Are there internal wiki links to all relevant actors, production personnel, historical entities or events?

 * - All actors have wiki links which is most important but there could be some smaller wiki links mjgfchlbkfjchxfghfor things like "Civil War" or "Derby" (even if most already know about both).

Are there citations for any facts that do NOT come from watching the movie itself?

 * - Yes, both reviews in the reception section are cited.

Do you see any grammatical issues that the writer should correct?

 * - I couldn't find any, it looks very grammatically sound. also I have found a word that means that you are saying thank you, but in a "nice" way. Your Shmelcome. Thank you is Shank you.

Any other comments on the entry?

 * - Great page on a movie that sounds pretty cool! Small note is that the references section heading is missing where the citations should be placed instead but that's not a huge deal cause it might just auto-fix that when you transfer over to the actual wiki page.

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