User:NicolasSmith216/Kentucky (film)/Collinbivins Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

NicolasSmith216


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:NicolasSmith216/Kentucky_%28film%29?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Kentucky (film)

Evaluate the drafted changes
'''When you read the plot description, can you follow the story of the movie? Note any parts that'''

were confusing to you. While reading the plot summary I was kind of confused on what was going in. It seems like there are some holes.

Are there internal wiki links to all relevant actors, production personnel, historical entities or

events? There are links to the actors but nothing else

Are there citations for any facts that do NOT come from watching the movie itself? There are only citations in reception.

Do you see any grammatical issues that the writer should correct? There are some grammatical errors in the plot summary.

Any other comments on the entry? There could have been a little more added to this entry.