User:Nicole Lizbeth/Public participation/Reethespiethes Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Nicole Lizbeth


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Nicole%20Lizbeth/Public_participation?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Public participation

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * 1) First, what does the article do well? Is there anything from your review that impressed you? Any turn of phrase that described the subject in a clear way?
 * 2) The contributions throughout the article are all really smooth. Great flow and really useful contributions!
 * 3) What changes would you suggest the author apply to the article? Why would those changes be an improvement?
 * 4) I would cut out the reference to LWV because it currently reads like a self-promo. Maybe if you listed other, similar orgs it would work better?
 * 5) What's the most important thing the author could do to improve the article?
 * 6) I think it may be worth adding in a couple lines to social mobilization about what the obstacles are for low-income citizens and get a little more specific about how mobilization efforts work to change that.
 * 7) Did you notice anything about the article you reviewed that could be applicable to your own article? Let them know.
 * 8) ;o