User:Nicolecmerhi/Mirabal Sisters/Belleevans Peer Review

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Nicolecmerhi's on Mirabal Sisters


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This page is very short, and after reading it I'm still not sure what these sisters are known for. The article mentions that the women spoke out against their dictator but gives no further information on the movement. It also only mentions the one sister's experience. It opens with what has happened since their deaths and I think it would make more since to talk about their lives and then the legacy they left behind. Also, there should be separate headings in the page, maybe doing a heading for each sister would be a good start?