User:Nicoleemory/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Digital rhetoric

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
Well, the assignment is to evaluate this article. Moreover, digital rhetoric is the topic of our class and it is central to Technofeminist theory. The article seems well put together and the talk page has extensive conversation so I assume that the article has been reviewed and edited several times.

Evaluate the article
I think the lead section could be improved. One of the points for evaluation was whether the lead section mentioned a brief description of the article's main section, which it does not. The sentence "Technology has now been incorporated into every aspect of our daily lives that we can't even wake up without immediately reaching for our phones, which indicates the importance of fully understanding the power digital rhetoric holds." struck me as very conversational. I think that if it were edited to say something along the lines of "Technology has been integrated …" into our education systems, political structures, etc. that the sentence would be better and it would touch on more of the body of the article.

The content seems fine and balanced. I added a comment in the talk section about expounding more upon digital rhetoric's role or implications in the social media section because it is so brief.

The quality of writing is good, I noticed few errors.