User:Nicolelipski/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Andrea Holmes

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose it because I am very interested in gymnastics. It is important to recognize gymnastics as a sport and to have articles on it. My preliminary impression was finding someone that caught my eye and that had a good amount of information on them.

Evaluate the article
The article starts off by expelling that she is not an ordinary gymnast. She is a successful one with a prosthetic leg. I believe it has a good lead section. The content is good but it could be more detailed. The article has many reliable references. I believe viewpoints are underrepresented. The writing is organized with quality work. The grammar and punctuation is good. The article gets their point a crossed but some of the points should have been expanded upon. The article is underdeveloped.