User:Nicolemicha/Pathological demand avoidance/MPHILLI Peer Review

General info
Nicolemicha
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Nicolemicha/Pathological demand avoidance
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Pathological demand avoidance

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I like the proposed edits that you have made so far and they improve the article. Some of the suggestions that I want to make is the use of sources and making sure that they are from secondary sources so they hold more validity than other ones when making edits in Wikipedia. There are also things that you can add to the article to further improve it.

Adding more context to the causes of demand avoidance would also be beneficial especially for the last paragraph in the section. I can also see more context being added to the naming controversy and possibly some of the history behind the names.