User:Nicolerewis/The Half-Breed (short story)/Cjgatts Peer Review

Peer review
This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? Nicolerewis
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: User:Nicolerewis/The Half-Breed (short story)

Lead

 * The beginning of the lead works, but it began to resemble more of a summary because it contained certain story details, such as setting.

Content

 * The content is relevant, but there may be more information to add.

Tone and Balance

 * IThe content is neutral and is unbiased.

Sources and References

 * The references all seem good, but there are most likely a few more articles that can be found to add a little more information.

Organization

 * It is generally well-written, but some of the information from the lead should be allocated to other topics.

Images and Media

 * There were no images, but remember to at least add one image before publishing the article.

For New Articles Only
If the draft you're reviewing is a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.


 * Most likely could use a couple more articles to add some more information.

Overall impressions

 * It is specific to the story and helps with the understanding of what goes into the story, but it could use a bit more information and a bit of formatting.

Overall evaluation
Overall, it is a good start, but can still use more information and a good revision.