User:Nicolezakharov/Glycoside/Bibliography/ZP19 Peer Review

General info
Nicolezakharov
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Nicolezakharov/Glycoside/Bibliography
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Glycoside

Evaluate the drafted changes
The drafted changes provide a clear and informative overview on C-glycosides and their potential as use for mechanistic probes and therapeutic drugs. There is explanation in general on glycans but dives deeper in depths on the unusual nature of C-glycosides. The draft differentiates C-glycosides from their O-glycosidic counterparts. The advantages of C-Glycosides as better drugs is elegantly detailed with strong examples of better efficacy with relevant supporting research papers. Some potential points of weaknesses of this draft is that the introduction to C-glycosides could have been more direct with asserting the superiority of C-glycosides for therapeutics. Additional examples of improved drug efficacy may help solidify the argument on the improved drug efficacy. Lastly, the phrase "If you need to be convinced..." should be removed/reworded to maintain Wikipedia's neutral stance and passive tone.