User:NigelForest/Nelson, New Zealand/AG029 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

NigelForest


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:NigelForest/Nelson%2C_New_Zealand?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Nelson, New Zealand

Evaluate the drafted changes
The content of the article draft is neutral and does not show bias. The information in the article draft is organized clearly into categories related to the topic of Nelson, New Zealand. Great job on the selection of sources. There were many links with detailed information on this topic and I was able to access all of them. The use of grammar is very good, and I learned a lot from reading the article draft. There are many provided examples when it comes to the events held in New Zealand and the churches located there. I would personally add a bit more information to describe the major events and festivals in New Zealand. I really like the list and the number of events held. Overall, I think the content added to the article draft is a great way to improve the article and make it more descriptive. The information that is included is very useful to describe the city of Nelson, New Zealand.