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Article Evaluation
In my article evaluation on the word "empire" the first thing I noticed about the page was a brief sentence in the second paragraph that spoke about the business aspect of the word. This felt very out of place and irrelevant because the top of the article specifically states that it will be about the political and historical aspects of the term. Under the definition section of the article, it speaks about an empire being a semantic construction. The person who wrote this continues on to speak about why this is true and gives examples of it, but there are no clear citations of this information. The entire article is organized well, speaking about the building of an empire closely to how it has been spoken about in class. Overall the article is very neutral. I did not see any bias towards different areas of the topic and there was no one section that had more information or was overpowering another section.