User:NiiaBishop/Evaluate an Article

Lead section


 * Introductory sentence does not list everything he did. No description of article's sections. Lead is too vague.

Content


 * It is just a biography.

Which article are you evaluating?
Joseph Pilates(Provide a link to the article here.)

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
(Briefly explain why you chose it, why it matters, and what your preliminary impression of it was.)

Evaluate the article
(Compose a detailed evaluation of the article here, considering each of the key aspects listed above. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what a useful Wikipedia article evaluation looks like.)