User:Nik2608/Human–computer interaction/TheChosenOneAnakin Peer Review

Peer Review suggestions -

1) The first paragraph talks about how HCI is being advanced and is still a bit ominous to how to provide good HCI technology to everyone. But this paragraph can be utilized more to explain what HCI Technology actually means and why it should be provided to everyone.

2) Need to provide the whole text for some abbreviations such as in the second last paragraph, the abbreviation PDA is used and most page visitors not well-versed in HCI could be confused.