User:Nikitalee02/Duat/Wisemonkey07 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Nikitalee02


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Nikitalee02/Duat - Wikipedia


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Duat - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)


 * I noticed that you may need some improvement in terms of images and media. I suggest adding a few pictures to your article. Something to illustrate what you are writing about.


 * I am having a hard time figuring out where the information you write about is coming from. I suggest citing your sources using hyperlinks.


 * In terms of your Bibliography, your sources seem reliable and trustworthy.


 * I would try and focus your content into something more specific. Much of what is in your draft is in the current version of the article already.
 * Your content appears to have no gramatical or spelling errors. Much of what your write about summarizes the topic well. Good job overall.