User:Nikith Naini/Lactobacillus acidophilus/Hart Hequembourg Peer Review

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Evaluate the drafted changes
I am peer reviewing the article: Lactobacillus. I think your article could start with more of a broad intro into the Lactobacillus acidophilus which would also give you the opportunity to address what you will be discussing in the article. Your tone is good and does not seem biased in any way. I think you could definitely expand upon the side effects section of your article and tie that more into the function of the bacteria. I also think putting the side effects part below the therapeutic section could help the flow of your article. It looks like you have a lot of references for your article which is good! ~