User:NikkiBeanz/Asháninka language/Rebecca5802 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

NikkiBeanz


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Asháninka language


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * The lead is a little short, but it does a good job overviewing the wikipedia article. It is concise and goes straight into the point of the article. The lead does include an introductory sentence that clearly describes the articles topic.
 * The content added is relevant to the topic. I think the content is up to date. I think the article can say why the language is in danger more thoroughly. But otherwise, I think it has a lot of good information.
 * The content added is neutral, there is no biased claims, the content does not try to persuade the reader.
 * There are not many sources, but the sources used are reliable.
 * The content is easy to read and well-written. There is no grammatical errors and it is very organized.
 * There is only 1 picture included in this article. It is helpful to understand their alphabet and how kids learn it. However, the image is very small, I did not even see it until I was writing this peer review. I think that the picture should be moved or made a bigger.
 * Overall, I think this article can use some work since it is very short, but the information that is in it is interesting, easy to read, and very relevant to the topic.
 * Feedback - I would try making the lead a little longer and add some more information about your subtopics, I think that you should add some more pictures and make the one picture that is in the article bigger. Otherwise, I think it is a good wikipedia article! It is a very interesting language! ~