User:Nikkicalvert/Ebolavirus/FeyUnlocked Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Blynnski34, Nikkicalvert


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Nikkicalvert/Ebolavirus


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Ebolavirus

Evaluate the drafted changes
I will be evaluating the Ebolavirus structure section of the article.

The fact that Ebolavirus is part of the order Mononegavirales is already mentioned within the main article. It is unnecessary to mention it again within the drafting.

The information you are giving is incredibly dense - which is completely fine - but it will require hyperlinks to other wikipedia articles that explain different phenomenon or structures (such as oligomerization or endonucleases.)

To fit with the formatting of the rest of the article, you may want to make the information regarding the NP and GP structures into more segmented sentences (or into bullets.)

A different option is to create a new section within the article and make the formatting consistent with the rest of the article.