User:Nikkigb/Effects of meditation/Kjoi2000 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Nikkigb


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Nikkigb/Effects_of_meditation?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Effects of meditation

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

'''I decided to peer review your article because my experiment is about the effects of meditation on mindfulness and stress! You utilized multiple sources and addressed many facets of meditation, including its neurological processes and psychological effects. I would add more detail to those particular facets and explore deeper as to why those findings are significant. The statements you included could be incorporated into some of the article's overarching sections, such as the "Effects of mindfulness meditation" subsection. You could also research more about the different types of meditation, such as insight meditation and heartfulness meditation. I never considered that there were multiple types of meditation, so it would be interesting to see what information you could find about these particular types. As I stated earlier, you included multiple sources and rephrased their findings in your own words; however, you could elaborate more on those general statements.'''