User:Nikkigb/Effects of meditation/Sab3434 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Nikkigb


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Nikkigb/Effects_of_meditation?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Effects of meditation

Evaluate the drafted changes
I believe every thing after the first sentence in your draft is just sentences of new ideas that will contribute to this article. I would just go into more detail on these subjects. Such as explaining the actual brain activity that is happenings. I see in one place you say mostly the caudate. But how is this being effected and how. Just more information on the type of effect we see in all aspect. Especially since we are talking about neuroimaging in some of this article. I think you are on the right track. (~).