User:NikoleM312/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Encarnación Cabré

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
(Briefly explain why you chose it, why it matters, and what your preliminary impression of it was.)

I chose to evaluate this article because it is about a prominent woman in archaeology. Historically, women have been prevented from entering the field of archaeology; if women were involved in archaeological studies, their discoveries and research would often be credited to a male spouse, family member, or colleague. Recently, there has been numerous efforts to remove barriers of access in the field of archaeology and credit women archaeologists of the past. When I first read the article on Encarnación Cabré, I noticed the article spoke mainly about her education and her father's work that she contributed to, but none of her own work.

Evaluate the article
Lead section


 * The lead does not mention the work of Cabré. This is an oversight that continues throughout the article.

Content


 * The article spoke mainly about her education and her father's work that she contributed to, but none of her own work.
 * Of her work in archaeology mentioned in the article, the majority is credited to her father.
 * The article fails to mention her specialization in Prehistoric, Greek, and Roman Art History.

Tone & Balance


 * The article appears to be neutral, perhaps leaning a bit towards misogynistic at times.

Sources & References


 * Many of the links throughout the article have no page in English
 * The sources are sparse and approx. half of the sources are not primarily about Cabré
 * There are many publications from various educational institutions and organizations that have unbiased and thorough information on Encarnación Cabré

Organization & Writing


 * The article is a bit dense, specifically in the section titled 'Academic career'
 * While no spelling or grammatical errors are obvious, many paragraphs and/or sentences can be restructured for improved clarity

Images


 * More images of Cabré's work would help readers reach a better understanding

Talk Page


 * This article is part of four WikiProjects
 * It is ranked as 'Low-importance' on two of the WikiProjects
 * There is no current or past discussion on this topic

Overall


 * This article is rated C-class
 * The article provides an accurate and detailed timeline of Cabré's life, as well as recent recognitions
 * Improvements can be made by adding information on Cabré's own work and the specific contributions she made. Additional sources from more recent publications would also benefit the article.
 * The article is under-developed
 * There seems to be one main contributor to the page, which could contribute to the overall tone of the article