User:Ninapetersenn/Massachusetts smallpox epidemic/KindleHoodie Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

User:Ninapetersenn/Massachusetts smallpox epidemic


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Ninapetersenn/Massachusetts smallpox epidemic
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Massachusetts smallpox epidemic

Evaluate the drafted changes
Content


 * Most of the content so far seems fairly balanced, especially the sections on Indigenous populations and Variolation during the outbreaks.
 * Some sections lack information (Colonization, Future Outbreaks), but it's most likely because they are still in progress.
 * Smallpox Defined feels a bit unnecessary here, as I feel readers who want to know what smallpox is would just go to its' designated Wikipedia page instead.
 * Additionally, all sections focused on Indigenous infection would fit better under one umbrella (paired with the original article's Native American Infection section), using smaller subheadings to break them up rather than them all having the same large headings (Similarly to the Handling the Outbreak Section).

Tone and Balance


 * Tone seems to remain neutral throughout (good!).

Sources and References


 * All sources seem to work properly and most are placed appropriately.
 * Effect on Indigenous Populations seem a bit lacking when it comes to sources/citations. It'd be best to double check and add where necessary.

Overall Impressions


 * Most of what you got so far looks pretty good! Your group seems to be collaborating with each other well. Outside of a couple locations needing some touching up, I'm sure this article will turn out great.