User:Ninapetersenn/Massachusetts smallpox epidemic/Pricejones14 Peer Review

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 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ninapetersenn


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 * Massachusetts smallpox epidemic
 * Massachusetts smallpox epidemic

Evaluate the drafted changes
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I think that you have a really good start to your article. One thing I would make note of is to try and get some of your sections to be more close in length. For example, The colonization and spread of smallpox section is shorter than the effect on indigenous population section. That being said, I think that the section on indigenous people is a really strong section and has a lot of really good facts. I think that your article so far seems very neutral and unbiased. Overall, I think you have a really strong start!